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1. Woww. I thought the burglars would have been toast if it wasn't for the eagles. No, really, they would have been toast if it wasn't for the eagles because they would have burned alive in that tree. This conflict between the goblins and the Wargs versus the burglars had just begun, but it already was bad when they just met them on mistake. When I was reading that they were stuck up in a tree that was about to burn to the ground, I had to keep reading on. It kept on grasping my attention and made me want to read more. I kept on thinking," Is this the end of our great burglar group, or is this the begining of the War of Five Armies.
Good conflict, Nik! So many of you chose this! Not too many people were able to put it in their own words so well. I just wish you had written more. You have a wonderful voice! Keep it up. I might have your read yours aloud - K? ~Mrs. Best